by juster2
d2necro wrote:
First off, cool!
"Skills that make you well suited to monster riddled dungeons"
This reads awkwardly -- "to monster" reads like a verb.
Suggest:
"Skills to decimate the rampaging dungeon hordes."
"Skills that make you well suited to monster riddled dungeons"
This reads awkwardly -- "to monster" reads like a verb.
Suggest:
"Skills to decimate the rampaging dungeon hordes."
Decimate means to kill every 10th man, a way of disciplining a Legion.
To be pedantic :).